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Old 27-04-2010, 04:20 AM   #16
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another update. hmm..however I'm not satisfied with the result..maybe gonna start again with the new one.

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Old 27-04-2010, 09:02 AM   #17
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ok..I start a new one now

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Old 27-04-2010, 09:04 AM   #18
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Old 27-04-2010, 12:17 PM   #19
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Hi Androgs, in the first matte try to avoid the simmetry. In the second, try to move the mountain in the middle. It's better for the composition if this mountain is in one side of the image.
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Old 27-04-2010, 03:27 PM   #20
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The latest image posted looks like it'd be pretty good, there's certainly potential there, but dude you really gotta get a move on, there's really not alot of time left at all now!
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Old 27-04-2010, 11:13 PM   #21
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BBB & chunkymunky, thank you so much for such a kind critiques and comments

Here's the update so far, decided to keep the mountain at the center but smaller in size.

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Old 28-04-2010, 12:10 PM   #22
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That's working pretty nicely for you.
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Old 28-04-2010, 04:47 PM   #23
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Thank you , chunkymunky..I hope can make it well until the deadline. Here's another update..

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Old 28-04-2010, 07:58 PM   #24
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Wow, once the trees are corrected in the foreground I think this will look amazing! (well, it does right now, too, but you get my meaning right?)
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Old 29-04-2010, 06:43 AM   #25
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be careful with the light....
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Old 29-04-2010, 05:49 PM   #26
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thefmilyofblood, Thanks for your kind comment , I do hope this one can count..

rofiqalfata, Thank you for remind me, I change the light source after read your comment ..it made me realize..

Hope this one is proper

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This is looking brilliant, the only thing that is catching my eye and pulling it into the centre is that wave cutting through the image. It might be best to cover/fix that up. I think colour correcting the water may look good as well.
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Old 29-04-2010, 07:39 PM   #28
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Jaxko, thank you so much for addressing that

here's the update again:

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Old 30-04-2010, 04:03 AM   #29
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foreground and background image have different horizon position, i think you should fix the foreground....
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Old 30-04-2010, 09:52 AM   #30
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Thanks rofiqalfata !!

here's an update at the moment
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