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Old 09-01-2010, 12:27 PM   #16
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like it, try to relax his frown a bit, unless that's what you are going for. great work so far man.
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Old 09-01-2010, 07:15 PM   #17
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also he looks really manly o_o. I like the young adult/older teen look in your concept. Nothing much to critique tho, keep goin!
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Old 09-01-2010, 10:50 PM   #18
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bibhuti- thanx buddy im working on that now

xxxcubanxxx-thanks man, your right, think i fixed it with a smirk

ChaosDragonDZ- yea your deff right about that, made a couple changes

i made the face more fuller as teens in their early 20s would have (age range trying to go far lol) as for the frown, i made it a soft smile or smirk to fit the concept more like him. i might add more cuts or.....not?

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Old 09-01-2010, 11:47 PM   #19
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yeah face is looking younger and more mischievous now, which I guess suits your character. good work so far man, keep going.
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Old 10-01-2010, 08:15 AM   #20
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xxxcubanxxx- appreciate it, want him to look badass too lol

heres another small update. working on the pilot hat thats still very WIP, and started on the Gauntlets steam exits things lol still WIP.
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Old 10-01-2010, 05:32 PM   #21
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Looking amazing man.Keep pumping at this.
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Old 13-01-2010, 12:18 AM   #22
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D R E A M N T- thanks man, im going to try to make this sick lol

So heres the head, which is about done, but needs the thing in the center of the goggles. As you can see i added a few things and build-ed on top of my concept but still looking like the concept of course. added hair too. time for the body and the Legendary Gauntlet, gods left hand! O and this head is not the detailed one lol im bringing all this done in zbrush and adding more detail, what you guys think? and enjoy

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Old 13-01-2010, 12:24 AM   #23
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This is looking great, how u going to get all that detail on hi hat though
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Old 13-01-2010, 12:25 AM   #24
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This is looking great, how u going to get all that detail on his hat though
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Old 13-01-2010, 12:33 AM   #25
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Haha, great hat. It looks really cool and a bit crazy, I like the design
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Old 13-01-2010, 12:59 AM   #26
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Wow your really pulling threw man.One question though.What are the pipes in the hat for.Is there an engine or a pump or something within the hat?
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Old 13-01-2010, 02:26 AM   #27
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yeah, I really like what I'm seeing so far dude. One thing I would do is break the symmetry up a bit so it won't look as a an exact mirrored copy, but you prolly already know that, keep those updates coming.
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Old 13-01-2010, 05:36 AM   #28
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Tarik2d- thanks man, and what are you asking about the hat? lol

Growl- thanks a lot, im glad you like it, its built for the craziest bandit!

D R E A M N T- yea man all the way to the end. and for the hat i was thinking of a couple of things. maybe its for the gauntlet to excrete more steam. like theirs tubes hooked up to the gauntlet to the hat so when he works fast to steal the steam shoots out the back away from his face. the tubes would have to be heat insulating

xxxcubanxxx- i took your word into consideration man, and thanks for the
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did a quick test and I was thinking of an asymmetrical look, maybe he has a rip on top right and his hair is through the hole.??? what you guys think?
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Old 13-01-2010, 07:20 AM   #29
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I think it looks better with the hair on the top, that's a nice idea
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Old 13-01-2010, 09:54 PM   #30
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lol, i mean like that buckles, r they going to be seperate objects or all in the hat?
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