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Old 16-03-2009, 06:28 AM   #1
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Welcome. Thanks for stopping in. This thread runs in chronological order (well, except the final stuff).

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Old 16-03-2009, 01:48 PM   #2
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Wow Man this is looking smooth I love the feel of this guy! Reminds me of the character from Battlechasers though...
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Old 16-03-2009, 02:16 PM   #3
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yeah man! good start.
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Old 16-03-2009, 08:06 PM   #4
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I'm liking "h". He's got an imposing silhouette.
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Old 16-03-2009, 10:24 PM   #5
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Rych: which one are you refering to?
I have started to rough out H abit - I liked that one as well.
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Old 17-03-2009, 12:28 AM   #6
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wow. love the design joseph. my opinion..
- the skull.. downward horn (or maybe 3 horns?) definately. makes it look more like a demon skull.
- probably add some scars on his body since he's not wearing much armour.
- is he carrying a sword or a gun? i love that gun from HA dude on ur day1 sketch.

seriously cant wait to see ur full design
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Old 17-03-2009, 03:58 AM   #7
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thanks drGrim. will do with the scars and horns/ see about the tri-horn. It's a gun, just really unsure about the buttend; mechanical design and myself don't work too well together so it'll take a bit to figure out.
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Old 17-03-2009, 06:34 AM   #8
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Super-rough concept for the weapon - still need to figure out the ammunition functions and design. Trying to get that bloom effect, it's close but not there yet; any ideas?
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Old 17-03-2009, 05:35 PM   #9
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Looking good on the weapon, but where does the ammo go? One other thing is you might want to add some kind of sight to help with the top lines.
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Old 17-03-2009, 06:26 PM   #10
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I like where you're going with your concept so far. I'd vote for horns up personally, but that may just be me.

I think need to reconsider the scale of the grips on the gun, they're making it look like a short barrel rifle rather than a super long barrel gun. Give the Barret M82 and M95 [bullpup version of the M82] a look, if you haven't already, to help nail down the proportions of a gun approximately that large, might also help you get a few ideas as to how to do the ammunition.
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Old 18-03-2009, 04:55 AM   #11
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DAY 3 --
Thanks for that, Warlock. Didn't use much of that one but got me looking around...for some reason this awesome picture of a leaping kitten with a cape showed up. Anyway,...
Still kinda just shapes put together but it's an improvement.
SR_6274: At first I was thinking something like an ammo box strapped to his leg with the belt feeding directly from there - what happened at the gun's end was a loose end.
New gun design, and new warlord concept. Kinda like this one as well, have a story an all - try to finish it up along with the first one.
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i see batman o_O
love the new concept man. especially love the staff/tree he's holding. how big is he?
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Old 18-03-2009, 04:11 PM   #13
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Old 18-03-2009, 04:41 PM   #14
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Hey man on your original concept A look alot like the battle chasers comic, also Like the new guy a lot more personality!! Can't wait to see him fleshed out.

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Old 18-03-2009, 07:55 PM   #15
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Much better gun design now. Looks sweet.

Your war lord's pretty cool, I like the concept for his weapon. I think I'm still partial to "H" tho. It is only day 4 tho, so there's still time to play around for a while yet.
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