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Old 04-02-2010, 12:06 AM   #1
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Hey guys, been a while since i entered a contest, so heres a first sketch, critics are appreciated.
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Old 04-02-2010, 01:30 AM   #2
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Old 04-02-2010, 01:36 AM   #3
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Old 04-02-2010, 02:25 AM   #4
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WTB more fat rolls! Looking good
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Old 04-02-2010, 07:37 AM   #5
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Old 04-02-2010, 07:42 AM   #6
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if those're pecs they should be firmer; ir they're breasts they gotta be saggier.
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Old 04-02-2010, 12:37 PM   #7
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Damn, having breasts on a character does increase the number of replies . Thanks for the comments, the breasts are actually meant as moobs, not boobs, to look like a lot of fat is draped over his muscles, but im not sure yet how to get that look.
And ive made another sketch, looks more like an icemonster now i guess, but it lost some of his weirdness, so ill have to get that back in the next one.
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Old 04-02-2010, 12:56 PM   #8
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Sorry for the paint over, but I think you'll get more depth out of this character with more exaggerations, beef up the whiskers to add to the "...what...." factor and add some MORE fat rolls. Make sure to get some different coloration to show he's eaten well. He's the bad ass monster of the frozen wastes!
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Old 04-02-2010, 01:04 PM   #9
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Awesome, thanks! Looks better, ill definitely use these changes!
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Old 04-02-2010, 04:16 PM   #10
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And heres another sketch, according to a friend it looks like a psychobunny, tried to get it a bit more like the first one, seems to have lost his tits in the process tho..

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Old 04-02-2010, 05:28 PM   #11
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Looks good, but in all honesty, I like the second one's body style better. I think that the first and third have a more lanky feel and the second one seems more bulky and overall more intimidating.
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Old 04-02-2010, 08:25 PM   #12
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I don't dislike the rabbit form, but I preferred the heavier body style, with the small ears; the big ears make him look like a bit too much like Stitch, at least as sketch, I'd rather see you swap the big ears in favor of some antlers. Just my two cents, in any case you're kicking around some pretty cool ideas.
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Old 07-02-2010, 05:19 PM   #13
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hehe... those "ears" are antlers (moose-style, tilted backward to make him look a bit more agile)... hooray for sketching.. But i guess ill go with a changed number 2, looks the most ice-creature anyway. Thanks for the comments
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Old 07-02-2010, 06:54 PM   #14
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I agree with warlock. The ears just don't fit. Maybe you may want to consider some downward horns?
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