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Old 08-02-2017, 11:42 PM   #1
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Audi R8 model and render W.I.P

Hello community! I am new here and this gonna be my first post.

I was looking for a 3D forum, in order to improve my work through critiques and tips. Feel free to say something, even if you don't like

It's done with 3Ds max and Vray, hdri and backplate. I'm trying to work on my realism with the materials, such as the car paint flakes, metals etc.. Any critique would be awesome because you have different experiences and knowledge.

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raw render:


paint reference:


car paint flakes:


front view:


Please let me know what you think guys! I want to start working on bodykits, be more creative and think less on the technical part.

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Andre Bernardo
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Dude, this is excellent quality.
207 renders are perfect IMHO.
R8 ones however lack shadow under the car, near the tires.
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thanks! u totally right
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Old 09-02-2017, 07:47 PM   #4
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Thanks a lot for the feedback! You are right, will fix the shadow

The Peugeot it's my paint reference, trying to match the R8. I wish I could do something like that.


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