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Old 31-03-2011, 08:34 PM   #1
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ATOMHAWK - 3D - Penguin - tongeert

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This is the first time I participate on a competition. My idea was a penguin guarding the gate of an operation called Atomhawk. I've allready did some work on the penguin. I still need to do the arms. My idea was to do it in a sort of cartoon style but I'll do the materials later.
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I created the arms and did some work on the materials.
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Old 05-04-2011, 04:02 PM   #3
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Maybe I'll change the idea to something like James Bond instead of guarding a gate.
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Old 11-04-2011, 03:50 PM   #4
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The rest is coming soon, but I don't have very much free time. Here is the same image with improved materials.
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Getting better. What about the eyes?
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The idea was that he has sunglasses.
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Here's some more. But I can't get the cell shading material right, can anybody help?
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I forgot one thing but it still doesn't look right to me.
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I don't think I'm gonna use the building but here is some more stuff.
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And again some tweaks.
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Hi, you idea makes me smile, but, in my opinion, there's so much you can still explore, even if you want to stick with the "toon" look.

Composition wise, a red head rocket pointing up pushes your eye to much from the main char. I would also play with some textures just to give the forms some volume , put a bit of specular in the sunglasses as they are barely visible.

Just explore and have fun. Hope it helps. Good luck
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Many thanks for your help, all crits are welcome and much appreciated. I put a bit of specular on the glasses and did something with the materials, now I still need to think of the rocket.
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