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Old 10-02-2010, 11:04 PM   #16
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well i've done a bit of detail on the dudes runnin but i dont think they're quite right, need to do a little research on winter gear. it also feels like theres a lack of colour.

@Linc: I had seen that image before lol, but i didnt realise mine looked like it until u mentioned that, happens a lot with my pics, probably bein subconsciously influenced......
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Old 11-02-2010, 08:30 PM   #17
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Your work is always so inspirating, hard to keep da kids?
Great job here!
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Old 11-02-2010, 09:28 PM   #18
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VERY nice man! Just one thing i noticed, the guy on the left, shouldn't the other side of his face be lit? I mean if he is running back out towards the entrance then that is where the light source is coming from no?
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Old 11-02-2010, 10:23 PM   #19
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@washka: thanks man, im lookin forward to seein urs!

@bakuryu06: cheers for the crit dude, i didnt think about it like that but its certainly food for thought. at the moment the light source is a hole in the cave above the snowman, where the snow is comin in but perhaps i havent made this obvious enough. Also a light source from the direction u mention might give an added dimension to the image. will try this out as i work on the piece some more.

unfortunately no wip tonight, was too busy on the bad company 2 demo lol
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Old 12-02-2010, 12:42 AM   #20
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What do you think you're doing playing games? : P

Looking good..although the kids seem a little out of place, I think it's because they lack a similar texure to the big daddy. I'd rough them up a little and give them some stray fur.
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Old 12-02-2010, 04:36 PM   #21
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Yeah awesome stuff, keep it rockin'!
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Really good! I like it!
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it wz jst astonishing buddy!.............
keep up d gud wrk....!
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Just awesome!! This is one of my favorites! The result is getting too good! And the faces are just like I was expecting...pure terror! haha

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Thanks for all the comments guys! Got all the main things done now, guess all thats left is tweaking...unless i feel like makin more babies

@Omega Cell:thanks for the crit, tried to rough up the little guys a bit but i didnt wanna go overboard. might do a bit more in when tweaking.

@Brussel_Sprout, Seale, prosn, Resenhista: thanks guys!

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this is awesome but im extremely confused by the lighting. the guy on the lefts face is perfectly lit up by the flashlight, but the flashlight seems to cast no light on the snow beast or babies. also, it seems there is a big hole in the ceiling lighting that whole area, but i would like to see that cave in the back get dark faster, and make more contrast.

i know it would be difficult but i think the whole image would really stand out and be frightening if the snow beast was lit in the back by subtle light from the ceiling, and the guys flashlight casting the most light on it, which would also make it the brightest part and main focus of the picture.
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sir too much difference in parent and off spring , the parent looks more like an ice based demon.

try making the parent an adult version of the kids with red eyes.
give him a lil pot belly.

and humans could have brown furry coats with crystalised ice on them.

the cave could use a lil more depth.
the cave and the yetis look like one image and the men another.

reduce the yetis size to show them a lil more far off . right now it looks like the children have already caught the men.
the distance cant be made out.

show both stalactites and stalagmites ,a few off the ground should be taller then the men ,u cud also showone of them hiding behind it.
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Old 20-02-2010, 08:55 PM   #28
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Thanks for the crits aby arty and sarN.

I will most certainly take em into account as i work towards a final edition in the next few days.
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an update with some adjustments accordin to some suggestions by crits, I like the torch light now and the mood of the piece is a little better i think.

Still got tweaks to do here and there.
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