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Old 01-04-2010, 11:51 PM   #1
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Just a place holder for now, but the basic idea is to make an Indi character, but with a Samurai/Japanese Style. I'll have some concepts and progress soon.
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Old 02-04-2010, 07:00 AM   #2
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oO! really good choice!!!!! (I wish I had the idea) I expect the concept
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Old 02-04-2010, 11:04 AM   #3
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Love your previous work I and know you'll rock on this month's challenge too, looking forward to seeing your concept(s)
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Old 02-04-2010, 09:23 PM   #4
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ah cool to see u taking part dude, good luck!
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Old 02-04-2010, 09:35 PM   #5
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Are we going to see some kind of alien again?
There are Japanese aliens too, if you are out if idea!

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Old 03-04-2010, 04:15 AM   #6
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lol, sorry no aliens this time. Thank you all so very much for the comments, they are really appreciated.

Here is a concept for the head, just playing around with some ideas, if you guys have any suggestions I would love to hear them.



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Pretty cool start, nice proportions at the moment and he looks like he'll be pretty badass Looking forward to seeing updates
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Old 03-04-2010, 02:03 PM   #8
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Thanks for the comment chunky

UPDATE: Started fleshing out the body.

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Hey there! Nice start!
But i think that the character is too wide. Thats causing some errors in the stomach area.
Or maybe i'm wrong
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Looks really nice. You got the shape down nicely and I like the Character a lot. but like Cordero said I think he is to wide. The arms are good but I think he's about half a head too wide on each side maybe even less. It's very close and it could just be an orthographic vs. perspective thing. none the less it's wicked.
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Old 04-04-2010, 03:22 AM   #11
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~ Good job starting. The overall proportions could be more accurate. Here's a quick paintover to display the issues I'm seeing. It's mainly the lack of form on the shoulders and the huge torso in comparison to the arms, neck and head. I hope this is helpful:

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Old 04-04-2010, 08:50 PM   #12
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Thank you so much for the input guys and thanks for the paint over DreameR, I've tweaked the torso a bit and worked on the rest of the body. I still need to take care of some muscle groups that are missing, but here is some progress.

C&C are more than welcome like always.

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Starting to take shape

For me, he is still a little bit wide in the shoulder, and hip region.
It is really possible, that you hadn't touched the feet, and the hand area, but i'll post my thoughts on those.
I think, that the hands and the feet are pretty small. And i think that he is missing his ankle.

Anyway, good sculpt, and sorry if i said something that you already know
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Old 05-04-2010, 12:07 AM   #14
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Thanks for the suggestions Cordero, yeah I hadn't really done anything to the hands and feet.

I enlarged the feet and hands a bit and did some more small tweaks to the body over all look. I'm pretty happy with the proportions as they are right now, So I'm gonna move on and if I see anything else that bothers me I'll change it in the process. Gonna start working on the accessories and such now.

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Old 05-04-2010, 02:04 AM   #15
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Oye la verdad que esta salvaje eso socio hehe nice job keep going man
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