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Old 12-01-2010, 06:33 PM   #1
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Hi everyone, let's see my first concept

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Old 12-01-2010, 06:37 PM   #2
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Opi, welcome.
Nice concept, but you should see the border between the city and the mountain, or you should not see that much of the city.
Just my opinion.
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Old 12-01-2010, 06:42 PM   #3
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Matte Painting - Silver: 2nd place in a matte painting challenge! - Issue reason: 2nd place in a matte painting challenge The Coming of Ice Challenge: Polar Colony Matte Painting - Bronze: 3rd place in a matte painting challenge! - Issue reason: 3rd place in a matte painting challenge  
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You mean under water or frosen ? In all the cases looks fine, if u'll hard work on it
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I mean the underwater part.
The deeper,the darker the water should be.
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Old 12-01-2010, 07:11 PM   #5
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I like the idea.
Be careful about lighting of the city, i guess the shadows would be a lot more diffuse, firstly because I assume it's frozen in a solid water mass (not just a frozen water surface) and secondly since the rest of your scene seems to have no harsh sunlight either.

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Old 13-01-2010, 08:03 AM   #6
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I like your idea. Maybe you could have the tops of the very tallest buildings sticking out of the ice, just and idea. Nice work so far.
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Old 13-01-2010, 11:26 AM   #7
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thank all for the comments, i will do my best to improve my image following your suggestion

next wip coming soon
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Old 13-01-2010, 12:17 PM   #8
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HI!
Nice and classic color mix!
like France flag )))
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Old 13-01-2010, 10:12 PM   #9
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new wip

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Old 14-01-2010, 08:35 AM   #10
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Like the direction in which it's going. Love the rubbish bin like shaped robots or whatever it might be
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Old 14-01-2010, 08:24 PM   #11
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That are benders from Futurama
Nice picture man.
Some small waves arround the statue could be usefull.
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Old 29-01-2010, 09:21 PM   #12
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this is the end for me, i hope you like my final image

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