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Old 19-04-2010, 08:10 AM   #91
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much better. i liek the way the eye stands out now.

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Old 19-04-2010, 10:15 AM   #92
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The color grading works fine. Only those skulls on the rock seem a bit out of place now.
Keep up the good work dude
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Old 19-04-2010, 12:31 PM   #93
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Very good progress. I like the new colors and the much more mysterious feeling.
I would put the rock with the skulls partly in shadow of the big tree to make it stand out a little less. And the integration of the slabs still needs some work in a few places.
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Old 19-04-2010, 04:17 PM   #94
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i like this new color correction, keep it up!
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Old 19-04-2010, 04:20 PM   #95
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By the way, your studio looks sooo cool. I start to be jealous that you work in such a nice place
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Old 19-04-2010, 04:29 PM   #96
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Thank you very much. I worked hard to get it this way, but im very glad with it.
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Old 19-04-2010, 06:04 PM   #97
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the last image looks really good...you did very well since the first image...
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Old 19-04-2010, 07:06 PM   #98
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[Quote] Yeah I still like the scene, but I even prefer your last one, it's working better.
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Old 19-04-2010, 07:22 PM   #99
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Thanks for the comments. I really like the new coloring as well. I made some changes and tried to do something dynamic to the picture. I Know the shadow of the stone beneath the skulls is off, but im still working on that For now. Here it is...


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Old 19-04-2010, 10:46 PM   #100
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much better. i like some small details as the snake.
thoug i have some crits
some parts such as bushes far away in the back of the image are to clean and pops out of the picture. the same goes for the sculs, that big obelisk, snake.
as for the snake - its beautiful but its too clean and detailed compared to objects around it.
a slight blur for the obelisk and the bushes near it would make the scene more real and give the sence deph. as for the sculs - they are too clean .
resume of my words would be - equalize qality of the objects in the scene. now it looks good but not enough good. and fix that part in top left of the obelisk . it looks way off . either there are branches of the tree or some one thought that its a enormous coockie and bit that part off.
keep up the good work. good luck
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Old 19-04-2010, 10:59 PM   #101
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much better. i like some small details as the snake.
thoug i have some crits
some parts such as bushes far away..........

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Old 20-04-2010, 07:02 AM   #102
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Looking great Tjerk!
All seems to fit properly now, and the golden color grading toned it to the right mood.
Fantastic piece and good luck with it

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Old 20-04-2010, 07:54 AM   #103
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Here is an update and the full composition with close up shots.


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Awesome close ups dude!
Loving every bit of it
Good luck on this man.
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Old 20-04-2010, 08:21 AM   #105
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The snails are gone ...other than that good work ^^
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