Dominance War V - 3D - God Of Enlightenment - Newhere - Page 4

SquallLion1 · 11-04-2011, 08:13 AM

awesome !

Tycane3D · 11-04-2011, 03:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by newhere

Finished the body shape and photoshoped the lighting....still wondering on armor.

LOLZ!.

ok, i'm sure i would have cringed on every stroke u made on that beast.....get it...stroke....

Be sure not to overuse the polish brush on that one....

Did the topology allow for easy inflation?

....wait wait i got one more...

Ur sure not gonna have to use the magnify brush on that one........ok..lame hehe.

The rest is also kewl

Warlock 279 · 11-04-2011, 09:02 PM

One crit, something's not quite right with the chest. Seems like the pecs are sunken into the rib cage rather than sitting on top, also looks like the rib cage is too wide, might be worth taking a look at that.

I like where you're heading with the armor and clothing so far.

newhere · 11-04-2011, 11:24 PM

changed the waist area and fixed the chest area a lil. thanks everyone for the comments.

newhere · 12-04-2011, 11:58 AM

Photoshopped the lighting:

SquallLion1 · 12-04-2011, 12:10 PM

is the texture of the dress is over ?

washka · 12-04-2011, 01:14 PM

Sorry, couldn't retraint myself to paintover too...
Hope you'll take it lightly.

Keep it up!

(Oups, I've just seen that I forgot lightnings. : /)

newhere · 12-04-2011, 01:45 PM

SquallLion1: still not finished with everything so nothing is final.

washka: lol......i see you got jokes huh? which reminds me....i forgot to add a cape.

newhere · 13-04-2011, 12:29 PM

added more detailing to the model:

newhere · 13-04-2011, 12:34 PM

if any one has any thoughts on armor improvement....please let me know

SquallLion1 · 13-04-2011, 04:56 PM

the rope, the dress.. good work !
go on, pal!

paulius-st · 13-04-2011, 06:01 PM

looks good, but there are 3 things that bugs my eye.
1 - the rope. it looks more like this http://riverflowhomeopathy.com/wp-co.../anatomyGI.jpg than like a rope. the main problem is that the pattern is not complete and only a pair of bumps that go all over the "rope"\
2 -3dt logo doesnt integrate it to whole desing . i would look better imo if it was some kind of a medalion or other acsesorie.
3- where did his "manly weapon" go? did a drunk rabbi miss when doing circumcision ?

newhere · 14-04-2011, 07:41 AM

SquallLion1: Thanks and i appreciate the support.

paulius-st: Thanks for the comment........i am still working on the model so nothing is really final yet. Been doing searches on google.com to look at rope pictures and i found a few that looks good enough for me to get good angles of it for me to model. The 3dt logo i want it as an implant (sort of) to his heart. The idea is to have it as a conductor to help amplify the electricity that his body/heart and blood produces.

And as far as his "Manly Weapon"....it's still there hidden under his clothing, waiting to secretly disable all of the female warriors in the Dominance War that tries to buck up against him

SquallLion1 · 14-04-2011, 07:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by newhere

SquallLion1: Thanks and i appreciate the support.

you're welcome !I know you can do better than one

newhere · 14-04-2011, 09:18 AM

Changed the rope shape on the waist:

11-04-2011, 09:02 PM	#48
Warlock 279 Stealing your polygons! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 11�19′N, 142�15′E Posts: 1,120 Thanks: 2 Thanked 54 Times in 49 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	One crit, something's not quite right with the chest. Seems like the pecs are sunken into the rib cage rather than sitting on top, also looks like the rib cage is too wide, might be worth taking a look at that. I like where you're heading with the armor and clothing so far. __________________ ...if the viewer is left wondering if they should have been wearing 3D glasses, you're probably not using chromatic aberration correctly! * Lightwave * User

11-04-2011, 11:24 PM	#49
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	changed the waist area and fixed the chest area a lil. thanks everyone for the comments. Attached Images __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

12-04-2011, 11:58 AM	#50
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Photoshopped the lighting: Attached Images __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

12-04-2011, 01:14 PM	#52
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,757 Thanks: 216 Thanked 131 Times in 118 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Sorry, couldn't retraint myself to paintover too... Hope you'll take it lightly. Keep it up! (Oups, I've just seen that I forgot lightnings. : /) Attached Images __________________ Nexus (2D thread) My Blog Member initiate of the very secret splotcher congregation... If you really like what you do, you can make marvellous things, if you don't: use your eraser and take a breath!

12-04-2011, 01:45 PM	#53
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	SquallLion1: still not finished with everything so nothing is final. washka: lol......i see you got jokes huh? which reminds me....i forgot to add a cape. __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

11-04-2011, 08:13 AM	#46
SquallLion1 Squall Lion Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: BGU (France) Posts: 40 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	awesome !

12-04-2011, 12:10 PM	#51
SquallLion1 Squall Lion Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: BGU (France) Posts: 40 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	is the texture of the dress is over ?

13-04-2011, 12:29 PM	#54
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	added more detailing to the model: Attached Images __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

13-04-2011, 12:34 PM	#55
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	if any one has any thoughts on armor improvement....please let me know __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

13-04-2011, 04:56 PM	#56
SquallLion1 Squall Lion Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: BGU (France) Posts: 40 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the rope, the dress.. good work ! go on, pal!

13-04-2011, 06:01 PM	#57
paulius-st Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Lithuania,Vilnius Posts: 2,820 Thanks: 103 Thanked 361 Times in 340 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 16	looks good, but there are 3 things that bugs my eye. 1 - the rope. it looks more like this http://riverflowhomeopathy.com/wp-co.../anatomyGI.jpg than like a rope. the main problem is that the pattern is not complete and only a pair of bumps that go all over the "rope"\ 2 -3dt logo doesnt integrate it to whole desing . i would look better imo if it was some kind of a medalion or other acsesorie. 3- where did his "manly weapon" go? did a drunk rabbi miss when doing circumcision ? __________________ MY ART BLOG MY SKETCHBOOK SAMURAI BOT

14-04-2011, 07:41 AM	#58
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	SquallLion1: Thanks and i appreciate the support. paulius-st: Thanks for the comment........i am still working on the model so nothing is really final yet. Been doing searches on google.com to look at rope pictures and i found a few that looks good enough for me to get good angles of it for me to model. The 3dt logo i want it as an implant (sort of) to his heart. The idea is to have it as a conductor to help amplify the electricity that his body/heart and blood produces. And as far as his "Manly Weapon"....it's still there hidden under his clothing, waiting to secretly disable all of the female warriors in the Dominance War that tries to buck up against him __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

14-04-2011, 09:18 AM	#60
newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 11 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Changed the rope shape on the waist: Attached Images __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

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