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Old 03-05-2015, 06:33 AM   #1
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Freedom Jet (critique) New to digital art

Hey guys, this is something i just started working on, no reference so far just my imagination. Im a couple hours in and this is my first time doing a digital painting, do you think i could have a future in this? ( I don't paint traditionally either, no painting experience at all)

I know it still needs a lot of work, but what do you guys think of the rough so far?
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Old 06-05-2015, 04:58 PM   #2
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Not bad for a first go.

Critics now.
First of all, colour on the front is def a no-go for me as it straight away reminded me of an elongated suppository.
Secondly industrial objects have perfect shapes so wings and fuselage should not have bumps or show hesitation in your lines.

You also need to consider where the pilot would be sitting. Right now I think the cockpit is too far back and would not allow for great visibility.
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