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29-01-2010, 06:25 AM
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HI ALL...!
here i post one basic concept sketch... time is too short. but i wil try to give the best one from me. yours comments and critics most welcome....  |
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29-01-2010, 08:57 AM
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Wow! That's great! I like perspective and the moon light.
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29-01-2010, 09:29 AM
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looks cool, maybe the bird is a bit big or in the wrong place for my liking, my eyes keep going back to it rather than the guy
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29-01-2010, 02:39 PM
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Thank you Fbios....
....and Tarik2d... i agree your point of view... im going to correct it. but time is to shot. i will try. |
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29-01-2010, 09:41 PM
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+1 about the bird. Like your left wolf + tree.
Hey, maybe you could use piece of tree from previous competition, (scale and darker) it's got same shape than this one and had nice details, it's just an idea. 
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31-01-2010, 08:17 AM
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Thanks washka....sorry... i can't reply to you.
here i post some updates. but how can i finish thz.? time is too short. i will try...  |
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31-01-2010, 09:38 AM
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Maybe you also need some more light, your painting is really dark, I don't know if I can't see anything or if I'm blind.
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yes I agree with washka, a little more light would be welcome!
but otherwise very good job!
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Thank you washka and chris_solo.
here is one small update...  |
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Better now!
[Edit] How did the wolf managed to get there?
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This is exactly how I imagine the "Ghost Town" image! Very illustrative work!
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thank you Akim...
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