Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos - TMNI VISION - Page 3

Puckducker · 06-04-2011, 03:26 AM

Looks great, the whole design is starting to come together nicely. I'd say the skeleton along his back looks a little too flat and painted on, but it's a pretty minor crit. Nice work.

TMNI VISION · 16-04-2011, 03:45 PM

koyima:Thanks

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Martin_x: Thanks

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Puckducker: Thanks a lot

.I m working on the base mesh .Everything will be separated there so that I can put all the details in zbrush. I will take more care on the skeleton then.

Here is a base mesh I created based on the concept sculpt. Started working for bottom part of the base mesh. After that I will start zbrushing for finer detail .
Hope you guys like this . Thanks

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TMNI VISION · 20-04-2011, 11:19 PM

Hi guys,
Not that much of an update but posting it anyways.Its just screenshot from maya viewport. Thanks

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washka · 22-04-2011, 07:29 PM

Gettin' hot here!
Like the skull ornament concept but the cheap repetition kill it, what could you do:
-Try different size, add some different details, scale...
-Different integration ways...change orientation.
That's maybe a useless comment because it's just a WIP and you already know that.

-Like the back small body part, but it needs more integration work, a bit floating, some more fusion/mix with the back maybe?

Down part needs more work, some bracers or something to emphasize hands.

Those are just track man, great work so far, like your entry, keep it up!

TMNI VISION · 22-04-2011, 08:42 PM

washka: Thanks man you r right about the repetition . Its bugging me too. Doing some concepts about it , and when I m happy will do the change and post it.And also waiting till I m done with the base mesh and get back to zbrush for the final details. But for now I just started on bottom part of the body. Hope you like it.Thanks

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Vitrux · 22-04-2011, 09:06 PM

You are getting better with your god, he looks incredible at this point. . very nice details. Love that little Fetus? Alien? that little person down his legs..
Well, even that you need to work more on his body he is looking right I just notice some disproportion in the upper torso.
I see some problems between the Deltoid and the Trapezius muscles. And maybe the clavicle is a bit down and the Pectoralis muscle too small.

It is just what a see, but if you designed he like that from the beginning so it is fine.. he looks really really good anyway.

Keep going

GregStrangis · 22-04-2011, 09:18 PM

Armor is looking pretty sweet so far! Keep pushing the design!

RogerP · 23-04-2011, 01:33 AM

very nice, really like the anatomy and details on the armor so far

TMNI VISION · 23-04-2011, 09:04 PM

Thanks a lot guys for such nice comments

. Still working on the bottom part. I will post some updates soon. Thanks.

GoodAtom · 23-04-2011, 11:47 PM

good job)
I think a nose and the mouth can to try be made more interesting

TMNI VISION · 30-04-2011, 02:19 PM

GoodAtom thanks

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Just started detailing today. This is wat I got so far. Still to start working on arms and hands. Thanks .

RogerP · 30-04-2011, 05:38 PM

loving all the details an wrinkles

Vitrux · 30-04-2011, 06:02 PM

Nice mate, is looking good! He looks like the God of Chaos!

GoodAtom · 01-05-2011, 12:10 AM

good progress
forward to continue

washka · 01-05-2011, 09:06 AM

I would size down a bit forearms/hand part, details are coming along nicely, you could push this lill' figure style onto the robe. KIU!

06-04-2011, 03:26 AM	#31
Puckducker Da blue bus is calling us Join Date: May 2005 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Posts: 1,290 Thanks: 0 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Looks great, the whole design is starting to come together nicely. I'd say the skeleton along his back looks a little too flat and painted on, but it's a pretty minor crit. Nice work. __________________ The only way to define the limitations of our existence is to go beyond them. CURRENT WIP: DW5-3D-G�tterd�mmerung -Puckducker LATEST COMPLETED PROJECT: DWIV - 3D - Puckducker - Dark Matter

16-04-2011, 03:45 PM	#32
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 241 Thanks: 9 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	koyima:Thanks . Martin_x: Thanks . Puckducker: Thanks a lot .I m working on the base mesh .Everything will be separated there so that I can put all the details in zbrush. I will take more care on the skeleton then. Here is a base mesh I created based on the concept sculpt. Started working for bottom part of the base mesh. After that I will start zbrushing for finer detail . Hope you guys like this . Thanks . Attached Images __________________ WAR MECHA THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

20-04-2011, 11:19 PM	#33
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 241 Thanks: 9 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Hi guys, Not that much of an update but posting it anyways.Its just screenshot from maya viewport. Thanks . Attached Images __________________ WAR MECHA THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

22-04-2011, 07:29 PM	#34
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,757 Thanks: 216 Thanked 131 Times in 118 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Gettin' hot here! Like the skull ornament concept but the cheap repetition kill it, what could you do: -Try different size, add some different details, scale... -Different integration ways...change orientation. That's maybe a useless comment because it's just a WIP and you already know that. -Like the back small body part, but it needs more integration work, a bit floating, some more fusion/mix with the back maybe? Down part needs more work, some bracers or something to emphasize hands. Those are just track man, great work so far, like your entry, keep it up! __________________ Nexus (2D thread) My Blog Member initiate of the very secret splotcher congregation... If you really like what you do, you can make marvellous things, if you don't: use your eraser and take a breath!

22-04-2011, 08:42 PM	#35
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 241 Thanks: 9 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	washka: Thanks man you r right about the repetition . Its bugging me too. Doing some concepts about it , and when I m happy will do the change and post it.And also waiting till I m done with the base mesh and get back to zbrush for the final details. But for now I just started on bottom part of the body. Hope you like it.Thanks . Attached Images __________________ WAR MECHA THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

22-04-2011, 09:06 PM	#36
Vitrux Victoria Passariello Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Spain Posts: 558 Thanks: 83 Thanked 55 Times in 52 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	You are getting better with your god, he looks incredible at this point. . very nice details. Love that little Fetus? Alien? that little person down his legs.. Well, even that you need to work more on his body he is looking right I just notice some disproportion in the upper torso. I see some problems between the Deltoid and the Trapezius muscles. And maybe the clavicle is a bit down and the Pectoralis muscle too small. It is just what a see, but if you designed he like that from the beginning so it is fine.. he looks really really good anyway. Keep going

22-04-2011, 09:18 PM	#37
GregStrangis Registered User Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Armor is looking pretty sweet so far! Keep pushing the design! __________________ DW5 God of Gluttony Thread http://gregstrangis.carbonmade.com/

23-04-2011, 01:33 AM	#38
RogerP Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,785 Thanks: 312 Thanked 292 Times in 270 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	very nice, really like the anatomy and details on the armor so far __________________ MY PORTFOLIO SKETCHES & WIPs

23-04-2011, 09:04 PM	#39
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 241 Thanks: 9 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Thanks a lot guys for such nice comments . Still working on the bottom part. I will post some updates soon. Thanks. __________________ WAR MECHA THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

23-04-2011, 11:47 PM	#40
GoodAtom Registered User Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Russia Posts: 90 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	good job) I think a nose and the mouth can to try be made more interesting

30-04-2011, 02:19 PM	#41
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 241 Thanks: 9 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	GoodAtom thanks . Just started detailing today. This is wat I got so far. Still to start working on arms and hands. Thanks . Attached Images __________________ WAR MECHA THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

30-04-2011, 05:38 PM	#42
RogerP Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,785 Thanks: 312 Thanked 292 Times in 270 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	loving all the details an wrinkles __________________ MY PORTFOLIO SKETCHES & WIPs

30-04-2011, 06:02 PM	#43
Vitrux Victoria Passariello Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Spain Posts: 558 Thanks: 83 Thanked 55 Times in 52 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	Nice mate, is looking good! He looks like the God of Chaos!

01-05-2011, 12:10 AM	#44
GoodAtom Registered User Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Russia Posts: 90 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	good progress forward to continue

01-05-2011, 09:06 AM	#45
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,757 Thanks: 216 Thanked 131 Times in 118 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	I would size down a bit forearms/hand part, details are coming along nicely, you could push this lill' figure style onto the robe. KIU! __________________ Nexus (2D thread) My Blog Member initiate of the very secret splotcher congregation... If you really like what you do, you can make marvellous things, if you don't: use your eraser and take a breath!

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