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Old 21-01-2010, 01:51 AM   #61
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erm

alright then..

I've been over some bits to sharpen them up, put some work in on the belts and I may yet drop some more armour from her right hand.

The gloves need work, foot armour needs work (I'll leave it much as it is I think but I have to sort out the strap/plate arrangements), the torso badly needs another pass although i did squash the boobies a bit

im tired and my neck hurts. it's also time to move to big computer
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Old 21-01-2010, 02:05 AM   #62
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I think wider hips. Her boob belt also needs something to keep it "up" the way it is. Right now it looks like the belt is holding her boobs and her boobs are holding the belt...if that makes sense.

Don't lose the armor on her right arm, that is really one of the main parts of the asymmetry that I like about the piece. She could probably lose the extra piece of armor she has on the palm of her left hand though. eh, my 2 cents.
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Old 21-01-2010, 02:16 AM   #63
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yes - more junk in the trunk is required

thats what boob belts do... It does need pinching in as it looks like friction is the only thing holding it up (they all do).

what i mean about losing armour is that I might have to lose some more finger armour to make it feasible for her to hold the gun.

I need to rebuild the scarf too - its crap.

I'm gonna have to start the low-poly pretty soon. theres not all that long left now...
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Old 21-01-2010, 02:16 AM   #64
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he poopipe... looks gerat. i like the concept, big boots and a lot of clasps. realy impresive. keep it up.
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poop - Alright, I can see the finger armor going bye bye. Hmm...she needs a wrench in there somewhere as well. And yeah, the scarf is crap...but I knew you knew that. :P

now that I look at it more I can't decide if I like the Gears of War cankle look she has or not. I mean, GOW by no means pioneered the idea of the shin to toe idea but...hmm. I think I like it, kinda anime / joe mad style in there.

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Old 21-01-2010, 11:24 PM   #66
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replacement scarf - gonna fluff it up a bit so it meets her chin I think. it'll probably be woolly.


cankles are non-negotiable


i need to do those goggles
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I like the new and improved scarf.

When you do those goggles, you might want to look at moving the eye pieces a bit closer together.
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Old 22-01-2010, 12:52 AM   #68
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just as well you mentioned that really


here's some goggles
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Old 22-01-2010, 01:27 AM   #69
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quick suggestion for the main boob strap. To get past the whole "whats holding it up" issue. I think friction would be just fine. All you need is to show some stress on the strap and possibly some under boobage, being squeezed out the bottom.
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Old 22-01-2010, 01:43 AM   #70
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I can't help but notice that the boob straps are not see-through. A shame.


I do like the new scarf. And wooly is such a fun word. Goggles look great too.
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Old 22-01-2010, 02:08 AM   #71
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i agree! Clear plastic belts all around!!
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Old 22-01-2010, 10:57 AM   #72
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sounds like a lot of work

however, it does mean i get to paint squashed nipples
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updaaates....

various fiddly little details, a watch, earpiece things for her silly hat.


I need to stop procrastinatoring and get on with the colouring in, and hair and stuff
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Old 25-01-2010, 03:54 AM   #74
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I like the watch. Where does she put her gun? ...or does she just carry if around all the time?
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Old 25-01-2010, 08:42 AM   #75
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yey i love this
i'd make those clasps and straps/belts on her body thicker/bulkier just like you did on the legs
all in all it's an awesome design!
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