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Old 20-01-2010, 04:11 PM   #46
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ahhh thanks for the comments! glad you like him! ^^
sorry for not replying earlier, been a bit busy x]

Warlock 279, here are the final wires:


poopipe! damn.. where were you earlier?
i totally agree with you, but removing edges or loops changes the smoothing a little and then the normals don't work in the way they should :/ and i'm to lazy to re-bake them -_-

bokkie, the entire model is in one smoothing group (that doesn't work every time but worked quite well here x] )

Cordero, yeah, the wrench is fully modeled, but it's reaaaaaally a low poly/quality model XD

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here's the start of the diffuse map. Needs a lot more work, i know x]



does these colors work?
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Old 20-01-2010, 04:13 PM   #47
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looking really good, what r u rendering and texturing it in
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Old 20-01-2010, 04:17 PM   #48
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marmoset, the tool bag.
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Old 20-01-2010, 04:30 PM   #49
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Excellent work.
Design is great, execution is great.

Only thing that bothers me are the ends of the bedroll. Looks too flat. And I'm sure its far too late to fix it.
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Old 20-01-2010, 04:33 PM   #50
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wow. Very nice start!
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Old 20-01-2010, 06:17 PM   #51
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The colors look good, the one place I noticed are the knucle guards. You put scratches on them but I think it would be better on the front-edge of the plates and not on the back-edge of the plates.
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Old 20-01-2010, 06:24 PM   #52
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Old 20-01-2010, 06:55 PM   #53
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colour wise...

I'd maybe throw another shade in on the metally bits of his mask (around the snout)
I can't help feeling he's lacking brass
I'm not really feeling the colour on his blanket, a pattern would help but I kind of want it to be a much warmer tone.
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Old 20-01-2010, 07:15 PM   #54
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thanks for the comments ^^

Buzzy, now that you mentioned it.. yeah.. maybe i'll try to fake smth with diffuse, though i don't really think that'll work u_u

buzz001, thanks, good point x] will do

poopipe, thanks for the tips, agreed x] i'll try that
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Old 20-01-2010, 10:38 PM   #55
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Awesome character.Good job. Impressive tool bag.
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Old 20-01-2010, 11:54 PM   #56
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Old 21-01-2010, 07:13 PM   #57
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thanks x]
some small updates:




as there is some time left, i'm starting to think about the pedestal x]
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Old 21-01-2010, 07:55 PM   #58
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Wires look nice. The gear could stand to look a little metal I think, some darker values in the metal might help with that, otherwise it looks really good from where I'm sitting.
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Old 21-01-2010, 08:32 PM   #59
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Me like. Really nice design on the character.

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Old 21-01-2010, 08:40 PM   #60
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Looking good I like the colours with this marmoset do u put lights in and stuff, is it hard to use??
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