ATOMHAWK - 2D - wip - vnmribaya

[yinteck]

This will be a great piece when its done. I like the second color, more decent to the eye. The red one seems to striking. just my thought

[vnmribaya]

here some update, its something wrong with the comp, i dont know, may be you can help me guys, help!!

[elgama]

hi, 1st of all, i like how u move the main char over to the bottom right, now he has the attention he deserves About the comp i think there are 2 main things that need to be fixed. 1st the bottom of the building clashes with 1 of the chars, making them as if they were part of the same plane. Also, as you can see, they share the same values, the monster also has this problem. So my solution would be: move the building to the left, darken then 1st guy a bit, and lighten the monster another bit. hope it helps,good luck

[Kungfoowiz]

Hey bro, my crit is less techy, would prolly just say you maybe need more of a main focus, the star of the show I guess, make him show up! =) Have a guud one =)

[yinteck]

Maybe removing the round planet on the left and shift the monster to the middle and make it larger. Just my thought. Hope the help my friend

[hulahuga]

Please post your final image here along with one wip image (details below taken from the rules on this and other final details) Thanks, Tom

4. At least 1 additional image must also be submitted showing the workings of your image, for example, a wire frame, steps of a 2d painting, or the photos of a matte painting. You must try to make it clear to the judges how your image was created.

5. All entries must be submitted to the final entries thread by Midnight GMT Friday April 15th 2011.

6. Initial judging will be carried out by 3DTotal staff and moderators to select the best 10 for each category. At this point Atomhawk will come on board to select the prize winners for each category.

Deadline extension - Monday 18th April 12.00 midday GMT

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[aby arty]

agree with elgama on moving building to the left. you could also scale down the building to show the hugeness ofthe monster. and also you could show monster being attacked from the air.

and yeah change the title font doesnt gel with ur image try an alienish font.

[vnmribaya]

here some, i have very little time so today a draw my best, thansks elgama, kungfoowiz, yinteck, hulahuga, and aby for your critiques, and advises... aby why your not in the comp?
good luck guys

[prosn]

It's looking great buddy....but i think you should change the subtitle colors, it's not coming out properly....also need some details on front character......I think you are working on that.....I know It will excellent work....caz you are rocking buddy..............keep it up

[Kungfoowiz]

Good luck bro! Have fun! =)

[hulahuga]

You should make it "Atomhawk - No one escapes" instead of that long one with no one scffapes....

[vnmribaya]

prosn, thanks man, i think u rigth with the color and the details but i run out of time, thanks for the comment sman.
Kungfoowiz, thanks man good luck for u too.
dr. hula, u right, see ur comment after i´ve posted the final so... but i corrected the scffapes, thanks for the comments, good luck

[washka]

Hi vnmribaya, I don't completly agree with judge's comment for this one, but they've got a point.
The athmosphere of your painting has got A LOT of drama, far more than second place winner imo.
There was a lot of good entries on this comp' but congrats for your great one!

[vnmribaya]

thanks man, i really appreciate your coments, and i hope to join the dominance and fight side by side... i´ve been with lots of work, but i hope come out with some concepts for this weekend.. see you in the other comp man
cheers

[Mr.rime]

good job . nice idea bro.