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Old 14-04-2011, 09:03 AM   #31
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Hello mate, my critic is,blue blue blue blue blue! Everything is blue, that`s ok sometimes but, try introducing some complementary color just to push your blue even further, you can do it on the background, the suit, the gun, anywhere, just try it at least :P

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Old 17-04-2011, 10:08 AM   #32
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elgama- thanks bro.... I will surely work on it.
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Old 17-04-2011, 10:22 AM   #33
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Hello guys,
Here I have almost completed and given some textures on his armor, gun and ship. Here giving some updates .....I hope tonight I can finish it. Now I have little bit works remaining like another ships, main title and etc....I would like to get more suggestions from you all ....before final submit is there anything else that I can change
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Old 17-04-2011, 10:29 AM   #34
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Here have closeup shot on gun....used some textures for roughness purpose......hope you all like it
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Old 17-04-2011, 11:02 AM   #35
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I think that the light on his shoes are a little too bright, drawing the viewers' attention to them.
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Old 17-04-2011, 11:24 AM   #36
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MemoNick- thanks bro.....I will change.
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Old 17-04-2011, 11:49 AM   #37
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This is solid. Nice. I have apply a night city photo and overlay it on to ur picture, It give more contrast to ur background. But this is not set in a stone yet, u still need to tilt or paintover the background to match ur character.
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Old 17-04-2011, 03:25 PM   #38
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Coming up great .... Real great !!!! ....., but i think you will have to do a serious colorizing at the end to give it a "Movie Look" ..... Good luck.!!!!
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yinteck-Thanks buddy..... right now I am almost finished with my background.... I am not satisfied with my right side building, still I am working on it.

ipranawake- Thanks for your suggestion my friend... according to you what kind of colorizing should I give...
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Hello friends this is my next update...
in this update I have worked and modified it as per your suggestions...
I am trying to balance every thing to make it a perfect poster...
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Old 17-04-2011, 08:28 PM   #41
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hmm sir magenta mauve and royal blue in the background arent going ith ur character.

and also steer clear from mango toned colors , shoe's side rim lights could use some other shade of blue.

atomhawk in plane grey looks dull, you could show cracks in it filled with blue fluid that would be crazy cool.

also i think in 3d would look good in grey like current title.
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I agree with aby regarding the blue and red background. Also, the red shade is giving the upper part of the picture a feeling light, while in the lower part, the picture looks dark because of the blue shade. If you want to have a different shade in the upper part, then I suggest a dark purple. It should do the trick Good luck, may you win!
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the baby pink from the left is just perfect , dark purple is not required because his suit is along the same lines. change the yellow color of the gunship beams.and make all fashion like colors in ur bg more subtle. it shouldnt look like a bag of m&M's
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Hi guys
As per your suggestion I have changed something....and now it's time to final upload......
Thanks guys for your inspiration and suggestion.....
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