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Old 04-10-2010, 07:51 AM   #1
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Old 04-10-2010, 07:17 PM   #2
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Maybe if you would trow in a few more of those clip arts and such
If the main character is still visible, try to cover most of the hideous "green" spandex she´s wearing. More colors. Colors and clip arts....

Maybe a glass sphere somewhere, or a crystal sphere (higher IOR means more reflections). That will boost up the sence of more cliparts. Yeah.
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Old 04-10-2010, 10:21 PM   #3
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A LOT LESS cliparts.
Hardly any, NONE.

Im sorry but it makes it look tacky.
The model looks reasonable, I can see quite a few anatomy issues and those vile green trousers (you might wnat to tone that colour down)
If you wn=ant to do bats why not model them?
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Old 05-10-2010, 01:36 AM   #4
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Maybe if you would trow in a few more of those clip arts and such
If the main character is still visible, try to cover most of the hideous "green" spandex she´s wearing. More colors. Colors and clip arts....

Maybe a glass sphere somewhere, or a crystal sphere (higher IOR means more reflections). That will boost up the sence of more cliparts. Yeah.
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Definitely more clipart. Try looking through Microsoft office's clipart, and scale your images so you can see those nice pixels.

Also, you haven't used enough prefabricated models. Go into poser and throw every model you can get your hands on at the scene. Then open up photoshop and apply a lens flare to it. Finally, look back, and admire your hideously brilliant artwork.



Now, I'll say this now- this was a joke. Please, for the love of cthulhu, don't use clipart. It brings down the quality of the image. (as do many other things in the image) Really. Don't overuse and over edit the image in postwork, and put more effort in making your own models, and making a quality scene. Also, please don't put a character in lime green spandex again. It's burning my retinas.
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Old 05-10-2010, 03:03 AM   #5
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thanks for excellent comments.

huge part not respected opinion^^***********

enjoy my creative art as copyrights.

i gift to you touched sensation with free that's vaule,you must remember that^^******

see you in your next job when that's work not touched sensation^^******it's gabage,only work not arts,take little money as poor,never arts^^********

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Old 05-10-2010, 04:18 AM   #6
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I gather that translates to you believing that your art possesses something that other's does not because you do not receive money to do it? I'm sorry but that is going to offend a lot of people that worked very hard to get where they are.

There's not much I can say about the scene that hasn't been said -- but be aware that the advise people give is given in the spirit of making your work better, something desperately needed.

One thing I have to ask...why is she grabbing her ******? Female heroes have better things to worry about -- overcoming default sexual expectations not least among them. But maybe green itches.
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sry but the post-processing looks horrid! just render the chick and the "smeagol" character separately.
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thanks for comments to parleee and dopefish^^********

maybe my art show to dirty and random it's reality.

if art reading nature speacially original,reality like that^^*********

you must understand with your experienced life.

when you real feel hard with your life my work <bat> help your mind^^*******

i feel you are still young and chick with your life^^**********

i explain my work,why not^^**********?
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Old 05-10-2010, 07:36 AM   #9
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I like the lens flare.
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it's advised about art by sontaeseok for your batter work!!!



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I think (and this has been stated) that Salvatore has a competition to his throne.


sontaeseok, keep up the good work. Since, probably because of the language barrier, you didn'tlisten to me last time, I'm just gonna say

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What with the GIf, are you trying to take a pop at a forum member by saying its not art just because it doenst adhere to your idea of what art should be.

Art is subjective which means that what you consider art will be wildly different and equally as valid as to what someone else considers art.
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Old 05-10-2010, 02:58 PM   #15
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please learning concept with my speech^^**********

all considers art must imitation from nature,photography,live model,painter pictures^^*******

what is the considers?

in computer graphic more like a imitation art to just make money as assembly line^^********because you hurt to photographer as clip arts^^********

all photographer takes from nature^^********

presentation,composition,direction,producer....... these all mean to result!

art only sad with result.

i can get understand to value modelling and texturing but dectatorship or dogmatism i'm not sure^^***********

if those people continue dectatorship or dogmatism must remake concept with justice to professional philosophia even low^^**********

it will be very hurt to pride,brain,soul as like those people.

but nobody occupation world of art^^********

it's human rights and vioiating problem^^********

please more attention art!!!

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