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Old 28-10-2013, 02:19 PM   #16
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I don't know why but I'm not getting proper feedback here! but just because it's one of the contests rules I have to continue to post here!

anyway, here's the top view of the map:
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Old 29-10-2013, 05:15 AM   #17
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wow!! really cool!! you can try render with different angle.
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Old 30-10-2013, 06:56 PM   #18
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I like your assets and that your scene is so filled but i think your scene also misses a focal point. If you pinch your eyes, there's nothing standing out. Maybe add one or 2 hero assets to your scene which will take the main focus. Also another viewpoint might help to get a better composition. But i quite like the overall atmosphere so far, keep it going!
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Old 31-10-2013, 09:35 AM   #19
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Is that milk waterfall!? Awesome!! I like the elements you have individually, but theyre scattered around quite a bit.

If I was to give you any kind of feedback, I would say 2 things. First, take your camera closer to the road. There is so much to look at from an aerial view that makes it harder to process your scene.

2nd, try grouping the different candies into tight clusters and have large gaps between them. That will help guide the viewers eye around the scene as well, they will jump from one cluster to the next. Dont be afraid to get funky with scaling too, that's what makes the Sugar Rush image from Wreck it Ralph so sweet.

Keep on cruisin, this scene looks fun
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Old 01-11-2013, 05:20 AM   #20
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I'm working on a new map, cause apparently the last one was too tight to work with and there were so much brown! so as you can see on the top view I've widened the map and there's going to be more colors this time.

thanks all for the feedback, I will consider all of them

will soon post some screenshots (maybe today )

and yes Steven, that's a milk waterfall

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Old 02-11-2013, 01:36 PM   #21
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Here are some cars. not sure about some of them, they may change
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Old 03-11-2013, 09:50 AM   #22
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OK, here's the screenshot just to let you know how this progressing
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HUGE upgrade

wheres my milk waterfall!?
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Old 03-11-2013, 09:57 AM   #24
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It's almost hidden behind that second bridge. I need to apply some material to ground and bridges! so both the waterfall and the river pop out more!
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I think all it needs now is a giant fork so I can start eating.
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Old 03-11-2013, 01:36 PM   #27
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) don't touch! I'm still cooking and baking. after it's finished you all will be more than welcome to dig in
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Old 06-11-2013, 03:06 PM   #28
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I've moved the waterfall so we can actually see it!
also made some changes to make the scene more interesting
+ added some new stuffs and there are more to come!

let me know what you think, what you like and what you don't!
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This is coming along nicely Amir. Is this the final camera you plan to use? It would be cool to have that donut car on the left drifting around the corner with the camera following behind angled towards the tunnel on the right...and then you can add some sugar dust flying out from under the car. Just a suggestion to get some motion in the scene

stuff I like: cake and the frosting. the choco bunny island- the squinty eye is a nice touch of personality. grouped candy trees on top of the cake. also, i want to eat the guard rails first I think.

keep on truckin'

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Old 07-11-2013, 07:32 AM   #30
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Thanks Steven.
That's a pretty good idea. I will definitely try it.

Not sure about the camera yet. I think I have to finish the scene to decide the best angle. but what I have in mind for now is something in this area and another angle from the bottom of the bridge leading to tunnel with a view over the bunny island.
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