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Old 14-05-2012, 11:45 AM   #1
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Post Animation (feedback needed)

hi, i'm currently working towards creating a show-reel, and I've started working on a short animation. although its still in a blocking stage, i would love to get feed back before going on to the next stage. thanks and any feed back will be appreciated.
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Old 15-05-2012, 12:03 AM   #2
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Kinda hard to say what u are looking for. You have the key points placed and some intermedian, still missing the smooth moves of the animation. Put some updates of how its is going. See ya.
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Old 15-05-2012, 08:53 AM   #3
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thanks for the reply, i'll work on it
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Old 15-05-2012, 02:53 PM   #4
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I think you should push more to the extreme in the golden poses. the throw looks really weak.
try looking at this short animation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2kQ83_4RdkA

Try pausing the video on the extreme poses and study them, then try to reflect it on your character.

keep updating, this got potential. :-)
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thanks for the feed back, i'm doing a reference to help me as well
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Old 17-05-2012, 10:18 PM   #6
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ok i've done a few adjustment as suggested, the timing is a bit out of place, and some of the follow through are missing but i'm still working on it. as usual i need feed back to help me polish it to its final stage.

i feel like some poses could have been pushed but i'll let you be the judge of that.

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