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Old 25-11-2007, 11:28 PM   #1
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Hi guys!
that's my first try .... still wip but i need comment in order to improve this pic!
i'm still new to the matte painting world and i think that partecipate these challenges was the better way to improve technique!
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Old 26-11-2007, 09:49 AM   #2
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Very nice!

Two comments though -

The windows are the only sources of light (so far) so they should be a lot brighter compared to the rest of the pic, and maybe a bit less saturated.

You should add some stars or clouds to brighten the sky, the left part especially bothers me.


Anyways, I really like the light "coming out" of the windows, though it should also be brightened (I think)
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Old 26-11-2007, 10:11 AM   #3
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Hi. I love everybody's work here and I'd have to admit that you're all very good(I do hope that someday I can be like you guys). I'm not used to giving comments, but maybe that's the real reason for the WIP challenge(for us to improve our works and learn from others). Looking quite good , I just have one question though... I have seen the lights coming from the windows and by considering the shadows that goes with it, it seems that the light source is coming from below. I myself is still working on my WIP so, I might also learn from you regarding this one. Thanks and God bless

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Old 26-11-2007, 02:18 PM   #4
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Very nice!

Two comments though -

The windows are the only sources of light (so far) so they should be a lot brighter compared to the rest of the pic, and maybe a bit less saturated.

You should add some stars or clouds to brighten the sky, the left part especially bothers me.


Anyways, I really like the light "coming out" of the windows, though it should also be brightened (I think)
thanks man!
the sky is not already defined ... i still work on it!
for the light coming outside windows ... yes i will do more brighter !

for nocturn8:
i've assumed that there's not big chandelier hanged to the ceiling .... i think however that shadows from the big left windows was too slanted

thanks to all for the comment!!!
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Old 30-11-2007, 08:01 AM   #5
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small update
i want to remove all the shadows for modify how the moon light reflect on the church ... i think that's more intersting!
made some small update to the windows

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Old 30-11-2007, 09:33 AM   #6
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Nice update!
The shadow removal is great, you can't see where they were at all!
Where do you plan to have the light coming from? are you going to put the moon in the frame?
the window updates are cool too, but I still think they should be less saturated, or less orange.

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Old 03-12-2007, 10:42 PM   #7
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i've been very busy last week ...
only a small shadow removal update

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Old 09-12-2007, 03:32 PM   #8
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i've remove all the shadows and now start to work with the lighting.
i really need comment in order to improve the image!
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Old 11-12-2007, 10:37 PM   #9
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light update !
really need comment !!!

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Old 12-12-2007, 11:49 AM   #10
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well that orangy soft light on the walls is very nice and closer to reality than other artistic interpretations But I think the windows are too clean, sharp and bright....mess a little with them
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Old 12-12-2007, 11:58 AM   #11
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Thanks man!! this is the comment i need! i work on it !!!
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Old 12-12-2007, 06:24 PM   #12
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update!
i've added some mess to the windows and correct some dark zone
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Old 12-12-2007, 06:54 PM   #13
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better, but the yellow is still too uniform, think that the church windows either have painting on them, either you can see through them and then you will see more details inside...
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Old 12-12-2007, 07:35 PM   #14
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it's better?
anyway .. thanks man for the great support that you give me !!!

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Old 12-12-2007, 08:36 PM   #15
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ok now blur the shapes and add a light glow effect

PS: dont know how much it will help you, but here's a typical church window of this style:
http://www.vernon-visite.org/colleg/...vitrailEst.jpg
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