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Old 17-02-2009, 04:11 PM   #1
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Ama Dahy - VFS Modeling & Scripting Reel, Jozef van Eenbergen

Hi everyone

I recently graduated from the Vancouver Film school class of 3D72. This is my modeling and scripting reel. The whole is done over a period of 6 months (including the tree/forest generator).
I'm currently looking for employment and more then willing to relocate of course.

More work can be found here: http://portfolio.caveman-digital.com and you can of course contact me at 3d72jozef@vfs.com or jvaneenbergen@gmail.com.

Demo Reel (95mb, H264)

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I included several snapshots.
As for the tree generator I hope to release it soon with some small improvements and free of charge

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Old 18-02-2009, 03:46 PM   #2
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Not bad, there are some good stuff in here. I like the first scene when the camera starts rotating and it feels as if the whole environment is moving. Sweet!
However, there is a "but".

The reel is not dynamic enough, it should be more energic, with faster transitions between sequences.
The music fits perfectly the environment you have modelled but it's not lively enough IMHO. I don't mean to throw "people = ****" of Slipknot here, far from it, but something with more rythm would be great.

That being said, good job again.

Good luck with the job hunting!
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Old 18-02-2009, 04:45 PM   #3
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Thanks McFly glad you like it hehe .

The music has been written by the sound people from VFS, I of course gave the idea of the type of sound. They composed it for the reel reason why it fits the piece but being a metalhead myself a nice rock/metal track would be nice as well hehe avoided it a bit cause wanted it to be calm kinda put through the mood of a nice calm nature environment . But i see what you mean though ^^. I'll dig through some music I got laying around and see if I can come up with something a bit more energetic see what gives ^^
Thanks again and glad you like it
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Cool hey!

so u r VFSer

i didn't know that dude...

we may seen each other before ..am sure

i was at 3d70 and my name is Mohamed Aly Rabie

nice reel and its kinds rare to find a modeler who could do scripting ..best of luck and nice reel too

keep up the good work yo
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Yups I am pretty sure I saw you around ^^. I was in 3d72 same class as Jesus Rodriguez think you know him, or Farhad Mohasseb you probably know him too. Name is Jozef. I was the guy with the really long hair not sure if that says something to you though

You were in the class with Vinny and them right?
I remember your demo reel looks amazing!!

Thanks for the compliments glad you like it and I'm keeping an eye on ur sketchbook. really nice work you got going on in there too

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ooooooo man...u was the guy with long brown hair ..i guess so..
yeah yeah i remember you now!
i guess u sow me around when i was acting crazy with my big sketchbook to look for a pc to render my stuff ...i know i was mad cuz we had no render farm there...but anyways,

its very nice to meet u here dude...plz fell free to contact me at any time ..it would be my pleasure to help u if i could

and yeah i know Jesus Rodriguez and Farhad Mohasseb
..yes i was with vinny


but the thing i was kinda a vampire guy love to work at ni8 cuz the ant lab was unbelievable in the morning ..u know wt am talking abt for sure ..hhahaha


i will take a look to your new workshop and i will c wt i can do for u...again best of luck man ( the guy that i sow and never talked with )

also thanks for the compliment

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