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Old 14-05-2011, 09:07 PM   #1
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Female basic character and maybe some more (NUDITY)

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I started a new personal project. I want to make a basic female character for further usage. So here is the base of base
I tried to make it as simle as I could, and only cut edges where necessary.
Next step will be the UVs and GO-Z

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Old 15-05-2011, 01:05 AM   #2
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not bad.....what do you plan to do with her after your finished?
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Old 15-05-2011, 07:26 AM   #3
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Well... I'm in love with Asajj Ventress, so maybe this model will be a sith, but not sure.
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update 01

And here is an update from ZB. Firs I wanted to do the main forms, so used clay tubes brush a lot.
I know that anatomy is not my strong, so if you have anything to say what helps, just do it.
The head is not in final stage of course, she will be much more human, and prety. I just hated that block on her neck

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Ok for starters, I would begin by getting photo reference for anatomy. A site that I recommend is www.3d.sk or www.perfectpeople.net or simple yahoo or google search that which you want. Now for basic theories of height proportions I recommend 7 to 7 and a half heads tall. I hope this helps. Good luck.
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update 02

Hi!

here is a new pic prom the project. I wanted to fix the proportions and other problems. I used real person reference images. I hope it is better now.

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Some more adjustments:
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Better! Much better than before. Now you are making progress. Ok now you proportions in tacked, now its about refining muscle groups. I would still continue to look at photo reference of females. I don't know if you are trying to create someone in particular or just keeping it general. But I do suggest you try to match photo reference as close as possible and use that as your guide. Try to make your model look as close to the photograph. Look at whatever reference you need to. But yeah I would fix her butt crack by pinching that area softly bringing it closer together and then the front bottom of the neck needs some work along with where the shoulders meet the neck. Then ofcourse the feet still need sculpting. Keep going and keep us posted.
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Thanks!
I think I will do the muscles (ofc not all, just the big ones) and than add some fat where needed. But this is just a plan yet.
And I think a retopology may help a bit, but not sure.
I'm planing to get a wacom tablet (bamboo pen or pen&touch). If anyone has used it pls tell me if I need the "touch" part of it and the buttons, or not.
Thx in advance.

Update: I have bought a Bamboo Pen today, so there will be no excuses if I make crap
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And hi again!
Today I painted the muscles and some more parts, to get familiar with anatomy. I used human anatomy reference pictures i have found on the net to measure where the muscles begin and and, and to get the correct direction of them. But as always, I am not sure that I did right, so pls comment.
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I was playing a bit with the head (as a siesta). I know it is not so good, and far from real, but it was fun at least to make it.
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Hi! Here is an update of her. Today I smoothed the muscles, rebuilt her tits and rounded her butt a bit and added some little details like nails and other things. I hope it os geting better.
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Old 23-05-2011, 01:22 AM   #13
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Your definately getting better. I think the proportions need a little tweeking. Agent X has given some great advise. Can I do a sketch to describe what I mean by a little proportion tweeking and post it in this thread? It would just be easier for me to draw it out instead of writting about tweeking.

Your are doing great, and your dedication to your work is admirable.

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Hi!
Of course you can sketch! It is easier to understand. I am a visual type of man (what a suprise in a CG forum). It would be a great help. And ofc dont hesitate to tell the bad things. It will not upset me.
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Old 23-05-2011, 09:23 AM   #15
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sean_rodrigues mentions proportions need tweaking. he is right. there are parts that work, but as a whole they don't match. i can talk about it forever, but a drawover will explain much better.
1. maybe a slightly larger head, and thicker neck? the features on the face look fine, but maybe need to take up more of the face?
2.a. the illac crest seems high (green x). b. top of the femur/hip socket could be exaggerated more with some more meat (ladies are generally wider there for those child bearen hips) you'd also need to bring down her navel. i double checked mine, it doesn't sit as high as the narrowest part of the torso, its just above the illac crest.
3. the legs down to the knees are fine, its the lower legs that are the biggest problem. just bring the heels down a bit. a. also the feet themselves are a bit short for her height.
4.seems like parts of her wrists are missing, maybe take another look at some hand refs/your own or model a hand separately to understand better. it works in some of the angles but then not at all in others. maybe just a longer palm.


you're close, but now you just have to bring it all together and have it work as a whole. especially if you're intending on more realism, even though body types vary greatly from lady to lady :>
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